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    Author: AmandaLyn
    ASL Info:    18/F/ Centralia
    Elite Ratio:    3.59 - 292/292/42
    Words: 132
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 148
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       written on June 7th 2005... obviously before I changed my views on my faith, but I still think that the poem is good...


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    What is this faith,
    am I living it out in vain?
    I'm supposed to have joy,
    but i'm finding none in my pain.

    Where is my God
    who said He'd always be there?
    When my back is bent
    with this cross I have to bear.

    He's everywhere, but I just dont' see.
    My rock, my fortress,
    my God in whom I trust.
    The dawn is His smile in the mourning-
    the stars are His watch by night.

    As I take my eyes off myself,
    I see a bigger plan
    being set into motion
    by God's great hand.

    I am not walking this road of sorrow,
    Jesus is carrying me.
    I'm not running on strength that is borrowed,
    It's given to me to see,
    God's loving care.




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      This is a beautiful portrayal of faith.

    So many times I hear people questioning God, when we should be questioning ourselves about things we cause to go wrong, yes it true sometimes things happen that are out of our control, but that doesn't mean God did us wrong, He gave us freewill, with that we pay a high price of pain and suffering.

    Though, its a small price for all the wonderful decisions we can make on our own throughout life .
    Good write
    Edward
    | Posted on 2005-10-06 00:00:00 | by edthepoet | [ Reply to This ]
      an excellent statement of faith. lost in a sea of other people we do tend to feel alone but he is always there watching over. You seem to be very religious and in the times that we are in at the moment faith is hard to find.
    you are loved and a part of his great plans never forget that!
    | Posted on 2005-09-29 00:00:00 | by lilmiznaughty04 | [ Reply to This ]



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