This was written very well. The title really stuvk out to me because I have a strong opinion on love and it's forever..ness.
It was written very well, it didn't flow especially sweet but the content of the poem was awesome enough to distract from that.
Hope you get your answer to such a hard question. Keep up the great work and I'll keep reading
You do not know, you can get to know yoru woman but exactly not all of her thoughts, she can tell you lies as you can lie to her, so I Think you never know when love will end. But i think that love exists too, you just have to wait till that special person comes to your side!
very graphic your writing i like it
thanks for sharing!
peace and love
and if you have time please take a look to my writing i would really appreciate it!
have a nice day
i like this because it reminds me of something my friend said once. she wrote a poem and it started out with when is the last time you had a lover who really loved you? when is the last time you had a boyfriend that was really your friend?
There's a lot of double negatives in this thing. Some parts make you think that "yeah, this may be right" but then others just cause you to cringe (cuz love just isn't something that one should dwell on harshly.)