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    dots Submission Name: Is Love Forever?dots
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    Author: poet09
    Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 157/162/122
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    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsIs Love Forever?dots
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    When you say "I love you" do you mean it?
    After you say the words "I do"
    Are you really going to spend the rest of your life with that person

    Is Love Forever?

    People who find love at first sight
    But when they reach that person's soul its as black as night
    People desperate to be loved and yet no feeling of passion

    Is love Forever?

    Soul mates who have searched for each other all across the world
    Hoping to find that one that is "perfect"
    Never stopping to think that is the one who will break your heart

    Is love forever?

    Finding oneself in all that time during their life
    Parents who say I truly love you and I would do anything for you
    Yourself being alwayz saying I love me

    Is Love Forever?

    To find True Love a person has to decide what type of person will show them what True Love really means




    Submitted on 2005-09-29 06:28:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was written very well. The title really stuvk out to me because I have a strong opinion on love and it's forever..ness.
    Anyway...
    It was written very well, it didn't flow especially sweet but the content of the poem was awesome enough to distract from that.
    Hope you get your answer to such a hard question. Keep up the great work and I'll keep reading

    »Haely«
    | Posted on 2008-09-27 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]
      You do not know, you can get to know yoru woman but exactly not all of her thoughts, she can tell you lies as you can lie to her, so I Think you never know when love will end. But i think that love exists too, you just have to wait till that special person comes to your side!
    very graphic your writing i like it
    thanks for sharing!
    peace and love
    and if you have time please take a look to my writing i would really appreciate it!
    have a nice day
    Victor
    | Posted on 2007-09-19 00:00:00 | by vitoko | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this because it reminds me of something my friend said once. she wrote a poem and it started out with when is the last time you had a lover who really loved you? when is the last time you had a boyfriend that was really your friend?
    | Posted on 2005-09-29 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]
      There's a lot of double negatives in this thing. Some parts make you think that "yeah, this may be right" but then others just cause you to cringe (cuz love just isn't something that one should dwell on harshly.)
    | Posted on 2005-09-29 00:00:00 | by The Imbroglio | [ Reply to This ]


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