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FATHER, FATHER


Author: mysteryed
ASL Info:    44/male/california/usa
Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 20 /35 /18
Words: 160
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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i see in this piece the last 2 people left on earth, man had long since moved bellow ground,


FATHER, FATHER



FATHER, FATHER



Tell me father once again
Of how it used to be
Back when man could walk the land
About birds and fish and trees

Tell me about the oceans
About trains and boats and cars
And how people used to meet
At shopping malls and bars

Tell me about the writers
And the stories that they wrote
The books that became movies
About the languages that they spoke

Tell me about the weather
And the sun that warmed your face
Then the snow that fell from skies
About the cold that took warms place

Tell me about the people
All the colors that they be
Then tell me about eyes again
And what it is to see

Tell me father tell me please
Just tell me once again
Father, father, oh father
Father is this the end


By Mr. E Jones








Submitted on 2005-09-29 17:55:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is simply beautiful, and perfect. It is like the Grecco-Roman poems, which told stories - and I like the scifi element of it, as well. This is going on my favorite. Heres your favorite line:

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| Posted on 2005-09-29 00:00:00 | by wordslinger | [ Reply to This ]


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