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    dots Submission Name: FATHER, FATHERdots
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    Author: mysteryed
    ASL Info:    44/male/california/usa
    Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 20/35/18
    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 244
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       i see in this piece the last 2 people left on earth, man had long since moved bellow ground,


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    FATHER, FATHER



    Tell me father once again
    Of how it used to be
    Back when man could walk the land
    About birds and fish and trees

    Tell me about the oceans
    About trains and boats and cars
    And how people used to meet
    At shopping malls and bars

    Tell me about the writers
    And the stories that they wrote
    The books that became movies
    About the languages that they spoke

    Tell me about the weather
    And the sun that warmed your face
    Then the snow that fell from skies
    About the cold that took warms place

    Tell me about the people
    All the colors that they be
    Then tell me about eyes again
    And what it is to see

    Tell me father tell me please
    Just tell me once again
    Father, father, oh father
    Father is this the end


    By Mr. E Jones








    Submitted on 2005-09-29 17:55:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is simply beautiful, and perfect. It is like the Grecco-Roman poems, which told stories - and I like the scifi element of it, as well. This is going on my favorite. Heres your favorite line:

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    | Posted on 2005-09-29 00:00:00 | by wordslinger | [ Reply to This ]



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