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Author: mysteryed
ASL Info:    44/male/california/usa
Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 20 /35 /18
Words: 169
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Freinds, family, countrymen,
people of the planet Earth,
here these words I say to you,
and take them for their worth,
what was is when, now is, and then is then,
and true justice never existed,
for me my word is law,
as is with a God held in Awe,
so fear me or I will have my vengeance,
and if my words did say,
my deed is done I will pay,
but my life is mine,
to do with in my time,
anything I should desire,
interfere with this rule,
and we’ll find out whose the fool,
for you will never underestimate
anyone ever again,
oh yes I am just one,
and so is the father,
and so was his son,
and here on Earth your in my heaven,
so my kingdom will come,
and my will, will be done,
and on Earth my battle will end,
but for now Ive only begun.

By mysteryed

Submitted on 2005-09-29 18:04:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Wasn't as good as that other one, but still infinitely more entertaining than most of the garbage posted on this site. Make it more clear and it'll be up there with the "Daddy" thing.
| Posted on 2005-09-29 00:00:00 | by wordslinger | [ Reply to This ]

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