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    dots Submission Name: Scram Bowldots
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    Author: Ratboy
    ASL Info:    17/Male/South Slocan B.C.
    Elite Ratio:    5.17 - 50/73/22
    Words: 45
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1119
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 253



    Description:
       I'm not going to give away to much on this one, except that it may help to say it out loud. Please write me a comment on what you think, but don't give away anything.... Send me a PM if you figure it out.


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    dotsScram Bowldots
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    Pee pole scram bowl din ah not
    Die wreck shone stiffer ant
    En ding snot

    Lie fizz nut sigh no
    Won saw round
    Thus pin erg owes

    May been ow yew sea
    Weed up end
    Awns an itty




    Submitted on 2005-09-29 21:34:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      luv it!

    wow, finally a good poem that makes you think!
    it did take me awhile, going back over each line,
    and that sixth line was the hardest!
    did you-oh wait! im not supposed to give anything away!

    ima send you a PM!
    | Posted on 2005-10-30 00:00:00 | by Avril54 | [ Reply to This ]
      ha ha ha ok no giving it away, very witty. this clever write i have to say i never seen anything like it so far that ive been on the site! great creativity and humor is well recognized. good message too, i have to say cute too wow its alot of things. excellent work,

    ~mike
    | Posted on 2005-10-13 00:00:00 | by inspirit999 | [ Reply to This ]
      Screw off Bonnie! I was so not in the right mind set when I first read this. (a few too many drinks for Kim, I think)

    Sam, I read threw it again, and finally got it, I think. I'll pm you my results, you can tell me if I'm any where near close.

    Great job on this Sam. You are a wonderful writer and I really hope you let us read some more of your work...that means you have to post them up, my dear. Lol, I'm just messin', although I would like to read more.

    ~Your #1 fan (yeah, that's right!)
    Kim
    | Posted on 2005-10-08 00:00:00 | by Rain | [ Reply to This ]
      SWEET! This is so very orignal, it screams it! Dude, this is awesome, Sam! I got it right off...I must be a freak or something, lol. Wow, I can't get over how cool this is!

    Heh, this rocks!

    (Heh, Kim didn't get it, I didn't think she would...love her though I do)

    You've got a great mind, Buddy, and I find it wicked sweet!

    Heh, this is SO going on my favorites!

    Bonnie
    | Posted on 2005-10-08 00:00:00 | by Krazy | [ Reply to This ]
      i think i got the first half down...but im still working on the last half... lol this is awesome sam. great job. really confusing, but hey, life is confusing too isn't it?
    | Posted on 2005-10-02 00:00:00 | by PsychoBabble214 | [ Reply to This ]
      ok..trying to figure out what it is; its hurting my head..

    so come on..just give up the answer!

    and then i'll put up a good comment
    kay
    | Posted on 2005-10-02 00:00:00 | by Kay | [ Reply to This ]
      Sam, I am so freakin' confused.
    My brain is so not getting this. Maybe it's just because it's the weekend and my brain is on vaca, yeah, that's what I'm going to blame it on. I don't want to admit stupidity.
    Wow, I can't believe I don't get this. Oh well.
    Nice job Sam. You're going to have to let me in on what's going on.
    Have a good week.
    Kim
    | Posted on 2005-10-02 00:00:00 | by Rain | [ Reply to This ]
      well it took me a while to get but i finally got it .. this is really nifty i like this style alot it has to be really hard .. Great job on this keep it up!
    | Posted on 2005-09-29 00:00:00 | by Thirst4Serenity | [ Reply to This ]


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