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Submission Name: a single tear dots

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Author:	kjb
ASL Info:	21/male/NY
Elite Ratio:	3.35 - 256/351/64
Words:	136

Class/Type:	Poetry/Depressed
Total Views:	200
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	1005

Description:
lots of pain

a single tear dots

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Lay this down
A coffin for everything
That he ever said
That meant anything

No sadness
For regrets
Or pain
For wounds

Let him hide
It from her
Temptation to mend
And lick his wounds

A war
With a heart in the middle
his own
Sleep it away

Close your eyes
He must close his eyes
Dream it all better
A single tear

Every ending
Starts a beginning
Every evening
Starts a mourning

He wakes
All is dark
But his heart glows red
It lives

Gloom surrounds
But it lives
Red washed
But it beats

How?
The ending was so clear
Hope is pure
Faith cures

Cold as stone
His heart shall be
Rock solid
Will its flesh be
Till it opens
And smiles
Once more

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welll the reason for this , which is not being commented is just it seems very mixed i love these lines

"Close your eyes
He must close his eyes
Dream it all better
A single tear

Every ending
Starts a beginning
Every evening
Starts a mourning"

well .. maybe try to join the other stanzas to this .. well keep writing and take care
thanks for sharing !
Victor
| Posted on 2006-03-17 00:00:00 | by vitoko | [ Reply to This ]

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