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    dots Submission Name: Gamesdots
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    Author: Poetic Cure
    ASL Info:    49.f.mn
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 313/137/33
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 225
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    Bytes: 1012



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       I got hurt this week by the bitch who cant control her anger.


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    They warn her with words.

    Blind to the games she plays.

    Casting more of her spells.
    Evil odorless perfume she wears.
    Witches brew poisoning the mind.

    Stupid minds open to the wrath
    of her vicious silent attacks.

    Somebody will be hurt someday,
    from the demon inside,
    who shows its ugly face
    and dances with fire
    of the darkness.

    She made me the victim
    to her mindless games.
    Causing me physical pain.

    Anger bubbling inside my pit,
    ready to boil over like lava.

    Getting away with causing me pain,
    makes me want to slap the demon silly.

    Hate has invaded my body and wants revenge.
    Words "don't let her get to you "
    burn the hair out of my ears.

    Anger close to eruption in my mind.
    Do I let HATE consume me?
    Or do I let the witch do the consuming?




    Submitted on 2005-09-30 17:46:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i have had people just like you described try and bring me down before most of them had succceded until one day one of the people i thought was bringing me down turned and gave me some advice i listened then we developed a friendship now i can almost call him a best friend
    you dont let hate consume you you reflect your feelings onto this person and talk things out who knows you could actually bring some joy into there life
    | Posted on 2005-10-06 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Creatively fighting back is better and you don't really have to stoop to her level. It all comes back around - she'll find out, at some point, what her cruel intentions do.
    It's tough though when you constantly have to be around people that just live to hurt others.
    I thought, "Casting more of her spells.
    Evil odorless perfume she wears.
    Witches brew poisoning the mind." was a very well done stanza.
    Love,Peace,Joy! tif
    | Posted on 2005-10-03 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      Hell hath no fury like a womans scorn ! Sounds like you have problems. Sometimes in life you know, you have to grasp the nettle and fight fire with fire. The only danger with that approach is that you allow yourself to be dragged down to their level. Rise above it all and show her what a sad individual this person is.
    | Posted on 2005-10-01 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      nice name and i really liked the post and up if u gotta deal with all that dawg i feel bucoo sorry for u lol i said bucco anywho good post du


    heavy knowledge aka chaz
    | Posted on 2005-09-30 00:00:00 | by heavy knowledge | [ Reply to This ]
      id rather face a pitfull of snakes than deal with a woman thats really pissed off(lol).you really sound mad.you protrayed that nicely.the only thing i have to say about this(and you really never give me any amunation)is that this was great and all.but you went from being really poetic to letting that madness youre experiencing get to youre writing and you went a little waywards with some of youre sentences.it did not bother me im just saying for creative purposes."want to slap"did not go


    i just read this again=never mind what i just said.it all fits'
    all apologies



    toyysruss
    | Posted on 2005-09-30 00:00:00 | by toyysruss | [ Reply to This ]
      i know people that just genuinely get under my skin in the worst way. i try to stay away from this people, and when i can't help but be around them, i try to just grin and bare it. i think we can all relate to this piece, everyone probably having atleast one person like this in their life. but, to quote an old adage, life is too short. don't hold this anger inside of you. to quote another adage, the best revenge is living well. the bible says not to let the sun go down on our wrath for another. if possible, talk to this person and try to express yourself in a non-confrontational way. good write.
    | Posted on 2005-09-30 00:00:00 | by caster | [ Reply to This ]



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