This is a good poem! Happy poems are so nice to read cause there just seems to be so much sadness and anger in the world today and so many poems which reflect that. Hopefully this poem is speaking of you and an unexpected turn around with this relationship? This sounds to be very personal to you and hopefully this comment finds you feeling better these days? A very lovely expression of your happiness with this one! Good poem! Take care!
i enjoyed this poem. i know the feeling of breaking the wall, so to speak, on writing only depressing and downer type poetry, and it's a liberating experience. good wording and structure. my only hang ups here are that there is some poor grmmar choices and a bit of akwardness at points. but other than the technical side, this piece was well done. good to hear of your newly found happiness. good effort.
I liked this. Not only because it was written very well, but because there was a special feeling written in these words. I agree with Drea that the flow was a little inconsistant. The first stanza having 5 lines, and the next 3 having 4 lines, that threw the flow off. Other than that, and a little on the rhyming, the emotion was amazing. I enjoyed it!
I really enjoyed this one.Not as others though.It could be better as in longer and with more detail.And like the others said,the ryhme flow is somewhat inconsistant.Other wise it's a really great poem!I hope you are doing well and congrads on learning to write much happier poems juat as you said.Well,keep writing.You are very good at this,so keep it up. - Lindel
Happy poems usually make me sad (because I cant relate) but this one made me smile. I just recently started being happy for people, and I really am happy for you (assuming this is autobiographical). This is excellently written too. I hope everything continues going well for you. As always, Great job