wow, that was... absurd? no i thought that it was amusing because of its... unique nature, i'm not really sure what you were going for with this, but i thought it was a great job if senseless fun was intended. ~Raven~
What's the point of life if we can't be wierd? And if we can't blow off with a little something silly now and again, then what's the damn point? This is cute..perfectly senseless and adorable. Tho it kind of reminded me of monkey's throwing crappola at people at the zoo...hehe little buttheads. Traci :)
Haha! This is a wonderful haiku! I dont think I have ever read one about monkeys before so this, I believe, is a first! Very nicely done with proper form and syllable usage! And its about cute playful monkeys too! Cant get much better than that in 11 words now can ya?! Really good job with this cute little haiku! Take care!
lol ha I like that. After I read it, I had to laugh and say, "what??" Thats how you know it's good. Whenever I make that confused, happy face, that means I like something. Too bad you couldnt see it. lol Oh well. You're right... it is weird... but I think "weird" is a compliment. Very nicely done.