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    dots Submission Name: Marreddots
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    Author: JimweiZERO
    ASL Info:    19/M/UK
    Elite Ratio:    5.37 - 1499/843/80
    Words: 150
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 532
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1006



    Description:
       This poem is dedicated to my father, who passed away suddenly two years ago today. You may think it wierd that i would write a poem about it but it was the least I could do after all he's done for me.


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    dotsMarreddots
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    Everything was fine,
    When you were here,
    Without realising it,
    I had somebody near,
    To talk to about anything,
    Like you always said,
    But my thoughts weren't voiced,
    Just locked inside my head,
    Where the regrets of it all,
    Is starting to sink,
    As the days go by,
    And I start to think,
    That without you,
    There's been so much change,
    But if you hadn't had left,
    My life would be strange,
    As half the things that I do now,
    Would not be possible,
    With you around,
    But maybe it's destiny,
    That you had to leave,
    Be it or not,
    Our family shall grieve,
    And my life will be marred,
    By your presence that should be,
    But a part of you,
    Is always in me,
    So I don't have to worry,
    About life anymore,
    And you'll always be waiting,
    On the other side of the door.





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      This poem is so touching and beuatiful. Writing about things such as this really do help with the healing process. At least I know it helped me. I never would've gotten over the death of my aunt if I hadn't written about it at some point. Its easier to release hidden feelings about things through writing. But this piece is wonderful my dear. Simply wonderful.
    | Posted on 2004-11-02 00:00:00 | by Juliets_dagger | [ Reply to This ]
      I didn't think it was odd at all. It was a beautiful gesture. One of those 'could have been' things. I loved it, it was very sad, but your poem conveys that you've dealt with it very admirably.
    | Posted on 2004-04-18 00:00:00 | by Voodoo_Lounge | [ Reply to This ]



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