Description: I love u sweety, and I will love u for ever and eternally.
Glad to be with you -------------------------------------------
I wad miserable,
I wasn’t with you,
I wanted to be with you,
But you weren’t close by,
So I was lonely,
Until I talked to you,
Then I was cheerful,
And I was wishing I could be next to you,
Now,
And for eternally,
yep pretty good ur point was clear...it did seem a bit more haiku...o well it's all cool...this was nice beacause it was simple and to the point...I can definatly relate to loving someone from afar and being miserable because you couldn't tell them...except the end cuz that's not gonna happen for me...not for a while I'm guessing. nice one and guess what? PEUDS now u have to comment on one of mine:P they're not really cookies...cookie==bomb peace
Wolfie I really like this In this write you speak of how important this person is to your life You are saying life would be hard to live without this persons Love This is so True I say This person because you brilliantly wrote this so that the person could be anyone that makes a difference in ones life Very Clevwer Wolfie!!!!! God Bless Your Friend Ron
I can feel how awfully lonely it can be. I'm sorta like that right now but I can still laugh! This is quite good and maybe make it more lengthier.(Is there such a word?)
Pretty good. Didn't really seem like poetry, more Haiku, just with more lines. Still pretty good though. I know how it feels to be miserable when someone you love so much is so far away. Well anyway keep up the good work.
Submission Name: Glad to be with you
