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    dots Submission Name: PIPE DREAMSdots
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    Author: joeym1962
    ASL Info:    43 / m / oh
    Elite Ratio:    5.2 - 83/75/27
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 216
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    dotsPIPE DREAMSdots
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    my dream was that we'd move away together
    perhaps live in a modest house by the ocean
    you would spend the days making art
    and at night we would perhaps listen to music
    and write poetry together
    i knew there would be problems
    but i thought if we loved each other enough
    held each other tight enough
    the problems wouldn't matter so much

    then something fundamental changed
    and a stranger now stands behind your eyes
    someone who regrets our lovemaking
    and chides me for apologetic scenes
    while i like a withered leaf am left cold and alone
    remembering the softness of your smile
    like the high green warmth of summer
    feeling the pain a leaf must feel in autumn
    as the wind grows colder
    and the sky goes from clear blue to cloudy gray




    Submitted on 2005-10-01 23:31:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Not a particularly deep poem, or clever poem, or even original poem, but it nevertheless has the merits of clarity, simplicity, genuine feeling and honest craftsmanship.
    | Posted on 2005-10-02 00:00:00 | by hanuman | [ Reply to This ]



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