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    dots Submission Name: PAin in wrong placesdots

    Author: uknown_misjuged
    ASL Info:    19/m/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 5/9/13
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Depressed
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    dotsPAin in wrong placesdots

    So where shall i begian a little to the left or a little to the right
    it doesnt really matter i always seem to loose the fight.

    So i sat down and decided to write a little, hope that all would be calm but what i didnt relize is that the argument was in myself and that piece would never follow.

    So i sit here wondering why my life has ended out this way, hopeing for an awnser to the question i neverwanted to explain

    should i give forgivness for all the many things ive recived so wrong
    should give apoligys for those oh so many things i have left in the beyond.

    well i know just one thing
    that pain is what my life is about
    and if i knew that you were listing id give a littel shout out.

    but as i sit here typeing wanting to cry
    i relize that my motive in life is based on one big lie.

    Submitted on 2005-10-02 14:48:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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