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    dots Submission Name: Dont Leave Out the Paindots
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    Author: intoxicated411
    ASL Info:    14/f/earth
    Elite Ratio:    2.38 - 45/60/28
    Words: 132
    Class/Type: Poetry/You left me
    Total Views: 243
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 892



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       another one about my ex boyfriend...i miss him so much...but he hates me more than anything...


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    There are some things a mirror cant reflect
    And there are some things my heart cant project
    And I'll be waiting here
    Until you choose to confess
    What you've been trying to bury
    Ever since you left me
    You thought if you left me
    You'd have more to gain
    I've felt love,happiness,and joy...
    But don't leave out the pain.

    I need you like a heart needs to beat
    But then again...
    Whats the point if it was already broken...

    And I will dream of you
    Until your heart falls back into my lap

    And they say hearts never lie
    But,baby,yours was faking a romance...

    I'll tell everyone the story
    Of how my hopes died in the rain
    I've felt love,happiness,and joy...
    But don't leave out the pain!!!




    Submitted on 2005-10-02 14:57:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I know it hurts now, but eventually a newer brighter beginning will come. You have a wonderful way of expressing yourself. I understand how you feel, maybe not exactly the same but I can relate. I have been hurt many times and I have learned that without bad days, there would be no good. Life is full of surprises, take them all as lessons learned one day at a time.
    | Posted on 2005-10-02 00:00:00 | by angel_eyes9701 | [ Reply to This ]
      Great write. I totally know how you feel. You really shouldn't go on missing him or crying over him leaving you, cuz if u love him that much and he hates you, see it this way, it his loss not urs. You can find someone better and someone who loves you back. You don't need someone pretending to love you, cuz they're just tying you down from finding someone who really loves you. Anyway great write, hope it works out for ya.

    >:D
    | Posted on 2005-10-02 00:00:00 | by skullreaperX_X | [ Reply to This ]



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