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    dots Submission Name: I'm Afraiddots
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    Author: Uruvasule
    ASL Info:    17
    Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 46/67/22
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 228
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 901



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       Just.......how I feel at the moment - can love exist at 17? Does it even exist period?


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    dotsI'm Afraiddots
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    I don't know what to say
    I'm tongue-tied with confusion
    I don't know what to think
    My mind is lost in this illusion
    One second I'm in love
    The next I'm lost in doubt
    I wish there was forever
    And that you truly loved me
    I wish there was a bond to sever
    And that I was the only one you see

    I'm too afraid and uncourageous
    To enter such a game as love
    But when it comes to play Pretenders
    I'm there as prompt as morning doves
    You call for me, I'll come
    You tell me 'twill be done
    But if you ask to love you
    I will without a doubt be gone

    Don't believe that there is hope
    Don't tell me that our love can cope
    Just go, believe this is the end
    I'm too afraid to turn that bend




    Submitted on 2005-10-02 16:38:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hmmm...I know how you feel about love. I am 15 years old and wonder quite often about love and lust. I love this piece, a LOT. Welcome to my Favorite's List!

    ~Wind~
    | Posted on 2005-10-02 00:00:00 | by WindEmpress | [ Reply to This ]



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