You really shouldn't make that the title, you know. I'm not a perv, God no, but I DID come here expecting to have to berate you about the horrors of posting inappropriate poetry. NOT SMART. I hope you're aware that there are poets here under the age of 14 who don't want to have to read your title, and ask their parents what it means. NOT SMART. For the sake of yourself, and other poets, kindly remove that title.
I was suprised to find it wasn't about Hot Raunchy Sex (& a bit disappointed!) considering some of the others you've written...muwahahaha~~~ Gotta give it 2 ya though on your marketing ploy! I have this action figure of the Croc Hunter I got as a gag gift one Christmas you press his back and he says, "Crikey, that's the biggest snake I've ever seen" and a few other sayings. He's a crazy nut! Crikey! Love,Peace,Joy! tif
i agree with poet, the title was so controversal that most people saw it, looked behind them to make sure no one was watching (just in case), and clicked anticipating a "pleasurable read". the repitition is interesting, and overall i thought i was a pretty good write, keep it up