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    dots Submission Name: painting with chamomile teadots
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    Author: strangeling
    ASL Info:    22/M/Tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 58/82/59
    Words: 272
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 296
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1676



    Description:
       makes very faint but interesting lines on the canvas of a cheaply made movie theatre screen in some backwoods county fair.


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    dotspainting with chamomile teadots
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    fresh meat
    testing testing fresh beat
    deftly deflty creep wrecking wrecking
    all bets off lift off
    countdowns be done with
    and all the whole while the kid was boxed up like lunch kits
    here munch this
    gave him the whole grape bunch
    left with all the crackers plus the lemon cherry drank punch
    told him thanks much and kept it on the cordial
    bug
    wrapped like the taco beef hot like ya coffee mug
    i'll be damned
    what about the ham
    be nice to the little fellows slice em what he can
    dice em up a nice fresh onion
    tossed it
    left it hangin in the air so he could pause for applauses
    veggie rain
    hedged it on the last butter add on point
    bagged the half a cheese log
    left the heat on
    so when you come back the shit burned and left a grease fog
    leap off the sides of hot fry pans
    a squirrel dive straight into blaze pads
    left with a braised ass
    flubbed it
    there's too much production
    in your production
    gold rush hustlers apple orchard thieves
    bishop never once moved diagnal if ya ask me
    vast free go fall for someone else
    underground travelers got no time those
    "oh.....well.....see you when the snow melts"
    grow bell flowers in small pots on my porch
    someone wrote in my cement sidewalk
    but i think the names were forged
    freshly poured
    squose
    like a batch of oranges for other's breakfast juice
    rose colored glass house
    fuck thrown rocks i have an ax now




    Submitted on 2005-10-03 11:33:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      It was nicely written. I wish I had more to say but I really can't think of anything. I know it has meaning. Quite nice.

    Fukk Love from Within
    | Posted on 2005-10-03 00:00:00 | by Thinkingofyou | [ Reply to This ]
      It was nicely written. I wish I had more to say but I really can't think of anything. I know it has meaning. Quite nice.

    Fukk Love from Within
    | Posted on 2005-10-03 00:00:00 | by Thinkingofyou | [ Reply to This ]
      It was nicely written. I wish I had more to say but I really can't think of anything. I know it has meaning. Quite nice.

    Fukk Love from Within
    | Posted on 2005-10-03 00:00:00 | by Thinkingofyou | [ Reply to This ]
      It was nicely written. I wish I had more to say but I really can't think of anything. I know it has meaning. Quite nice.

    Fukk Love from Within
    | Posted on 2005-10-03 00:00:00 | by Thinkingofyou | [ Reply to This ]
      I don't think you tried too hard on this. Buts that ok cause sometimes you got to piss the thoughts that come to mind into the wind. Good rant.
    -peace-
    | Posted on 2005-10-03 00:00:00 | by disillusion | [ Reply to This ]



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