Psudo-Intilectual Tripe by DontSaveMySoul

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Submission Name: Psudo-Intilectual Tripe dots

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Author:	DontSaveMySoul
ASL Info:	20/m/cali
Elite Ratio:	3.84 - 194/184/42
Words:	114

Class/Type:	Random Thoughts/Serious
Total Views:	249
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	757

Description:
Started in trashing fools who feel the need to get thier two cents worth in on my conversations, but shifted over at the end the imply the possibility of being a fool myself.

Psudo-Intilectual Tripe dots

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If one knows nothing
He should say nothing
If he can't use higher thinking
He must settle for lower thoght

If a fool interupts inteligent conversation
He will twice prove himself lesser
Once for his lack of knowlege
Again for thinking himself intelectually on par

Yet, if he trully is a fool, he will never be the wiser
He will read this, and think he can associate
He will become pretentious against his kind
He will feel like an elite intelectual

He will interupt conversations more ofter
His words will means less
He speak with the assumption he knows
He will be trully offensive

Am I really all that bad?

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  We're all fools, doing foolish thing foolishly whilst we participate in the folly of the foolish world!
| Posted on 2007-06-21 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
  You're right that a fool will often receive a hint as something that applies to someone else. I know I've been that fool at times. But I've also been the one dropping the hint, too. It's just a situation ripe for violence or humor. I hope humor wins out. It's so much more fun that way.

I've viewed several of your posts and enjoy your honesty. Writing should have an edge to it, and yours does. You can have all the spelling and grammar in the world and nothing to say with it. Thanks for puting yourself out there. And, since you've declared yourself to be your own God, go ahead and bless yourself with success. You might as well.
| Posted on 2006-03-07 00:00:00 | by Spare Change | [ Reply to This ]
  Needs a grammar check. Very intelligent, the way this was set up. And a very cunning shift. It starts out highly impersonel, but you can fell it becoming more and more personal on up until the ending statement. Good write.
| Posted on 2005-10-03 00:00:00 | by Dark_Dancer | [ Reply to This ]
  Huh, i really liked it. This write really makes you think. I love the first two lines,

If one knows nothing
He should say nothing

it sets the mood for the entire poem. No complaints here.
| Posted on 2005-10-03 00:00:00 | by pms792005 | [ Reply to This ]

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