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    dots Submission Name: unused chorus/ hookdots
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    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 29
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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    dotsunused chorus/ hookdots
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    can't you see the kings is here
    light the bud release you fear
    if you sit back, and don't act fucked up
    you just might luck the fuck up




    Submitted on 2005-10-03 15:34:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i can see ur hip hop's knew king and u carry it well. why didn't u use this hook? a lot of ur music is based on this topic
    | Posted on 2005-10-05 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]


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