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    dots Submission Name: Back in time, be great *sigh*dots
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    Author: Wolfeye_666
    ASL Info:    14/M/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    6.53 - 140/112/21
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 276
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       I'm puzzled and in a corner, so until then, im lost


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    dotsBack in time, be great *sigh*dots
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    Disappearing back in time?
    I wish I could,
    Be with my cherished ones,
    And still be glad,
    And not puzzled,
    Everything ideal,
    Being at your side,
    You understanding me,
    Me understanding you,
    The ideal world,
    Will it ever occur?
    I wish,
    But until then,
    I’ll be in a little spot,
    Trying to forget you,




    Submitted on 2005-10-03 19:19:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      yea.. going back in time would be fun ^.^ but those little mistakes we make cannot be changed.. unless we correct them. Rymme is always good in a poem to keep us readers reading. it soothens the rythem and makes it more interesting. good luck :P

    -J
    | Posted on 2006-02-13 00:00:00 | by Venom | [ Reply to This ]
      wow ubsessed with someone much haha joke it was good nice flow and rythem and wording keep up the good work.

    Love, Serinity Blade
    | Posted on 2005-10-04 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ]



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