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    dots Submission Name: my confessiondots
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    Author: bluecrane
    ASL Info:    19/F/WASHINGTON
    Elite Ratio:    3.61 - 70/83/26
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       i cant live this lie anymore, i want to do nothing but to tell him what is going on


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    dotsmy confessiondots
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    you know i love you
    but i don't feel
    the same way i did before
    it hurts so much to be with you
    when i love another

    he means so much to me
    he gives me what you can't
    a heart to take and keep sacred
    for my own that he can trust

    i gave you a piece of my heart
    thinking it was everything
    but there was something more
    in a way there's always a place
    for you my first love

    i hope that you'll be happy
    i have to let you go
    for both of us to move on
    so you can find the love
    i can no longer give

    i begged for you to love me
    but you never could
    so here i am saying good-bye
    to go to the arms laid open just for me




    Submitted on 2005-10-04 04:16:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      okay, here's a poem with some conviction. you go girl! just kidding...

    what i see... is a very frustrated and tired person who finally got sick of being walked on. good write, no criticisim.

    layla
    | Posted on 2005-10-04 00:00:00 | by colagirl | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, you're brutally honest here, this really tells it like it is, which is probably the best thing to do in this case.

    What a predicament...good on you for taking a step. Now that you're moving, run, girl, run! Happiness awaits!

    Be Happy

    Graeme
    | Posted on 2005-10-04 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]


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