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    dots Submission Name: Bittersweet Lovedots
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    Author: Shadow Orchid
    ASL Info:    18/F/CA
    Elite Ratio:    2.3 - 5/7/7
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
    Total Views: 337
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 850



    Description:
       A Poem I Did Awhile Ago.


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    dotsBittersweet Lovedots
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    The waves fall to my feet casually
    Greeting them as if to say hello
    As I walk down the endless rows
    Of white diamond sand

    Farther I walk, and finally I reach you

    I touch your pale, cold face
    As a radiant pearl tear rolls down
    Your cheek, I gently wipe it away as your
    Eyes gaze deeply into my soul

    You move your lips as if to speak
    But your words creep away into the
    Undulating waves crashing upon the shore

    You quietly touch my hand as our
    Eyes meet but they are not looking into
    My soul this time they are looking into
    My heart as if for forgiveness

    As you turn and walk away,
    I feel a bittersweet tear fall
    Down my face And I understand
    What you had wanted forgiveness for.




    Submitted on 2005-10-04 04:38:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like the fact that there was not much of a ryhme to it. Must people dont get that all poetry has to rhyme! Keep it comming'
    | Posted on 2005-10-06 00:00:00 | by shadows | [ Reply to This ]
      wow i liked it it had great emotion and flow and very nice wording i thought the write was awesome it rocked really awesomelly i almoast cried it was so pretty. Keep up the good work.

    Love, Serinity Blade
    | Posted on 2005-10-04 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ]



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