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    dots Submission Name: Hidedots
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    Author: Shadow Orchid
    ASL Info:    18/F/CA
    Elite Ratio:    2.3 - 5/7/7
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
    Total Views: 344
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 581



    Description:
       Im Not As Dark As My Poetry Makes Me Out To be, i Swear!


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    dotsHidedots
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    Cut Me From The inside

    Bleed Me, Bleed Me Dry

    Let Me Feel The pain

    Don't dull it Down

    Let Me Feel Its Full Force

    Let It Pull Me to the Ground

    Let Me Shake And Convulse

    Can you Hear Me Scream, Scream So Loud

    This Is What You Have Done to Me

    TURN AROUND!

    Look at Me, listen to the sound

    Does The Fact That You Did This To Me Make You Proud?!?!?

    Ya, Go On, Hide Behind That Innocent Shroud.




    Submitted on 2005-10-04 04:44:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ah well this is a very nice piece i liked it it was a very interesting. i liked the flow and the wording it was so awesome really it rocks. Keep up the good work.

    Love, Serinity Blade
    | Posted on 2005-10-04 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ]



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