This is a lovely prose. You capture nature very well with your words and your form is neat too. It adds personality to your words. The sunset is always beautiful and I like the description here of the cathedral in the sky from the cloud formation. That is cool and gave me some nice imagery! Very well written and expressed. Always enjoy your nature poems. Take care.
Tellow... is that like a mixture of tangerine and yellow?!... this is a soothing musepiphany! your appreciation and love of nature always shines through, we are kindred souls i think in that way.. i love the reference of the clouds like the dome of a cathedral.. beautiful! i was a bit confused by the title though, 'cause your vision seems perfect even with the clouds about and around!