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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       I...was musing.


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    into everything
    sometimes I think the fish make wind
    sometimes I think that there really is no point
    and you think it to
    and you cry to
    and you get angry
    and I'm sorry
    I'm sorry
    I really don't have an answer for why it is like this
    but it hurts, and I know
    but I can't help you
    not really
    I don't even know who I am
    I don't even have a clue
    I just wanna curl up and not know anything anymore
    just sleep and dream
    of stupid faces of old lovers and my heart has moved on but fuck man I keep dreaming
    I'm sorry
    I really don't know what to say
    I know you know what I mean
    and I'm sorry




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      this was a muse? more like thoughts that are on your mind and random hurt at that. i hope you can think of why you are here. you are here to help others. peace and be safe my friend
    | Posted on 2005-10-09 00:00:00 | by dudethis | [ Reply to This ]
      i am addicted to sleep.this is the only time i get to see past lovers,or one in paticular.you must first be able to help youreself before you can help someone else=you already realize this.

    you also have the knowledge that you are not the only person that hurts.there is an abundance in this world.i wish i could trade mine in for something else

    you amuse me when you get to cussing in youre writes=it usually fits though

    always a pleasure

    toyysruss
    | Posted on 2005-10-04 00:00:00 | by toyysruss | [ Reply to This ]


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