Description: I wrote this poem for my friend that I had a crush on and they didn't like me in that way . So the bleeding my soul came about when this friend told me that they didn't like me in a boy friend girlfriend way but just as friends I was realy hurt but that . I hope that you liked this one because I have many others .
bleeding my soul -------------------------------------------
I feeel as if my world has vanished and
I've fallen into a trap set by my love for you
A love that I know will never be returned because you hate me , I realy didn't plan on falling in love with you . At first I saw you as a friend with a lot of compassion but now I'm bleeding my soul and writting this for you .
I am growing weak ,my blood is flowing out of control, so is my soul. Before I die I want to tell you that I love you. I am burning up inside, about to die I need to hear you say three little words . As I hover between life and death I hear you say you don't know how much I love you . I was bleeding your soul so you could be pure and ture . But now your soul is as pure and as free as can be .
thats pure and solid, in general, what was written was deep but i was okay with it but tahst just me. it was pretty strong and i like that about it. you have a strong way of putting it in little words which is cool and only some people can do that.
I see that people have voted this poem as a 3, I can't imagine why. There is so much pain in this, so much that I felt it. Don't stop writing because you have potential.
Submission Name: bleeding my soul
