odd... no real form to it... just clips and phrases rearanged into some meloncholly form of a poem. sounds almost distressed, as though writen in an asylum, or spoken within the final throws of a manic life. well done.
I really like this, it's got this angry feeling, while still somehow being melancholic, but in a good way. it's a neat style, and it fits the words really well. Nice work.
this was great some old rock wods from good musicians vey well put togethe i got to hand it to you on this one thanx for your comment on untitled not sue your meaning though i have alwaz admired the good and evil of the unknown as far as the jews go i remembe their history was slaughtered by the germans i think we all have an unrested spirit within ourself some may never find it where i have been on deaths door 3 times in my life and that is why i can write the way i do thanx and good luck to you as well sandman
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