Description: This is for my best friend jon who died in a car acident on july 3 of this year . And I have to say that he was more than just a best friend he was my first boy friend . and my ove for him will never be replaced by another person .
The one and only -------------------------------------------
The one and only thing that you value more than life is love .
Love is what we all need to just survive . You once told me that when you were still in portage that you and i would go to montana for college now that you are gone i feel as if that you abandond me but i know that your death wasn't your falt . I have to say that I am sorry that I have balmmed you for abandoning me it wasn't you fault but mine . I love you even in death Jon
fault and blamed. this poem put some tears in my eyes. this was deep and heart felt. besides the spelling errors, this was so amazing. I hope all is well. keep writing.
I agree with disturbex1000, I can't believe nobody commented on this. I hate when so many people read my writings, yet they don't comment! I loved this writing. There were only a couple of grammatical errors. abandond...:Abandonned falt :Fault balmmed...Did you mean :blammed? Besides that good job.
this poem is very deep and seems to be very close to your heart. i dont see how anyone can not comment on this. a piece of work like this should never go unlooked and im glad to have made the first comment. thx for the read. brandon
Submission Name: The one and only
