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    dots Submission Name: Create Yourselfdots
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    Author: toyysruss
    Elite Ratio:    4.2 - 494/336/134
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       i try differnt types of writes.song love longing.
    sucide or death songs and poems,editorials and comedy.

    its like a wal-mart=a little bit of something for everyone(lol)

    toyysruss


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    dotsCreate Yourselfdots
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    Create
    You're going to do it anyways.
    Why not expand?
    Pen to paper
    Food to the oven
    Nail to the board
    Bolt to the nut
    All is the same.Creativity is apperant in all.
    How many different do you posses?

    Create
    Expand upon.You already shine.
    Writing is one of the more special.
    Express
    Man to woman
    Guidance to a child
    Guidance to their child
    A future
    All is the same.Creativity MUST be apperant.
    How many do you hope to posses?

    Create
    You're going to do it anyways.
    Here's some examples,
    A mistake
    A timeframe
    A meal
    A person
    Your self
    Create,expand upon
    You already have the tools.
    Someone already helped you to create them.
    When you were born.

    There are right creations,and there are some wrong creations.
    How many of each,will you try to be a part of?

    The future will be,
    ..........what YOU create



    toyysruss




    Submitted on 2005-10-06 18:04:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Excellent again
    People need to know that to create will not only better themselves but those around them
    I really appreciated this write
    Thank you for sharing it

    And thanks for your recent comments
    I always enjoy hearing from you
    You are a very talented writer

    Take Care
    and Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2005-11-11 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      i enjoyed this poem very much
    it is force feeding people to expand there mind and think
    this is something i hope to do in my writing
    for people to enjoy a happy peaceful life they need to keep busy which is exactly where creativity comes into place
    thanks for sharing it

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    | Posted on 2005-10-07 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      This is inspirational and CREATIVE...and original and it made me feel happy and it seems like a guidline for writers block...maybe it will help them.

    thanks for writing this...
    Jaz
    | Posted on 2005-10-07 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      Ok, I really agree with the ideas. I've always felt that life itself is an art, and you should live it that way. I also don't like distinctions between types of art (They're falling away though) because I dabble in visual arts and music too. I hate to sound like an English teacher, but you misspelled apparent and possess. "Expand upon" could be shortened to "expand" without losing meaning; yourself is one word, and "anyway" is preferred over "anyways." I think it should be "here are some examples," and you ellipsis should only have three dots. You can ignore me if you want. These are only suggestions. Good work, Amy
    | Posted on 2005-10-07 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
      great words of inspiration. i'm off at my first year of college so this speaks to me especially, because it reminds me about how i need to get out there and create new friendships, and learn more about myself. a great piece with a great message. something i will be adding to my favorites so i can always have it as a reminder!

    ~smlaw
    | Posted on 2005-10-06 00:00:00 | by smlaw | [ Reply to This ]


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