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    dots Submission Name: The Joys of Little Boysdots
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    Author: AngelOutlaw
    ASL Info:    21/female/OR & WA
    Elite Ratio:    4.37 - 672/392/64
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Prose/Childrens
    Total Views: 983
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 982



    Description:
       Get your minds out of the gutter! This is dedicated to 3 precious little boys who drive me nuts!


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    dotsThe Joys of Little Boysdots
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    The joys of little boys.
    Clearing ditches in a
    Single bound!
    Landing in every
    Mud puddle along
    The way!
    Discovering if
    Sand and dirt
    Taste the same,
    Or different!

    The joys of little boys!
    More water on the floor
    Than in the tub.
    Time outs taken
    Together?
    Choruses of screams,
    Never can tell
    Whether happy or fatal.

    The joys of little boys!
    Two different dishes
    Per every one meal.
    Tomato sauce covered faces,
    Melted cheese on
    Leather furniture.
    One green bowl,
    Two little boys,
    You tell me what to do.

    The joys of little boys!
    Grandma pulls up,
    Gather my things,
    Out the door!
    "Dinner's on their
    Faces, sandwhiches
    In their hands!"
    $28 for two and a half hours.
    Ah, the joys of
    Babysitting!




    Submitted on 2005-10-06 20:56:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I can only echo what others have said about THE JOYS OF LITTLE BOYS, everyone can relate to this one I think which makes it a fantastic poem, well done.


    Jamar2
    | Posted on 2008-10-14 00:00:00 | by jamar2 | [ Reply to This ]
      Hahaha... your description really made me laugh because at first for some strange reason I was thinking exactly what you warning not to think.

    I like this piece, reminds me how precious children can be I should know I have several younger siblings and at times they can be such angels and at others demons from hell.

    This was an enjoyable read. Keep up the good work and have a blessed and wonderful day and God bless. Thanks so much for sharing.
    | Posted on 2006-04-26 00:00:00 | by Departed One | [ Reply to This ]
      i love this write. it reminds me of my childhood. i was a little bad @$$. im sure i did all those things. hope this didnt happen to you while babysittin. but if it did sorry.well keep this up.
    -brandon
    | Posted on 2005-11-28 00:00:00 | by Leon Kennedy | [ Reply to This ]
      bad aSs little kids. gotta luv em but they drive u crazy. this reminded me of all my lil cousins. i don't know what i'd do without em. i haven't seen em since the storm hit,
    "troy"
    | Posted on 2005-10-09 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      HA! I liked this. My younger sister has 5 little boys (Ages 113 mos to 9 yrs old) and I can see each one of them here.

    Discovering if
    Sand and dirt
    Taste the same

    Hee-hee-ha-ha-ho-ho! Good one! Have a good one and keep smilin'
    | Posted on 2005-10-07 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      $28 for two and a half hours.
    Ah, the joys of
    Babysitting!

    I think it is nice to know you are payed for the joy. I like the plot twist with this. It also sounds like a lot of fun.

    The pieces reads well and comes across with feeling. I found it to be a delightful experience.

    Nice job!
    | Posted on 2005-10-07 00:00:00 | by beatthedrum | [ Reply to This ]
      this made me smile.this was really good=thoughtfully crafted.i have a 4 year old son so i could relate.there is a lot of talent in this writing and i mean a lot.youre perspective is the exact way it should be.and what you said was very nice=more than that put i cant put my finger on it right now=sorry

    anyways excellent job.the funny imagery you protrayed very nicely made me miss my son even more.me and his momma arent together anymore and i miss him so

    cool

    wes all toyysruss
    | Posted on 2005-10-06 00:00:00 | by toyysruss | [ Reply to This ]


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