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    dots Submission Name: many personalities verse1dots
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    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 180
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 512
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1132



    Description:
       this is about dr. shanxxx, the man in the mirror and J....and how they are all different in their own special way...you should understand it but if theres something you don't understand I'll be glad to help


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    dots many personalities verse1dots
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    workin on my different style
    leaving bodies dead in piles
    don't know what you gonna do
    Dr. shanxxx is after you
    you fucked now better run quick
    now everything you said caught up to you bitch
    (3 gun shots)

    This is the man in the mirror and I'm the second of all
    I show people who they are and make the laws
    I know you scared of everybody that you say youre not
    I know you future and your fate, it's burning hot
    you may think this man is obsessed with death
    but the man in the mirror ain't like the rest

    HI, I'm J, and I'd rather not talk
    I'd rather crack my head on this cynder block
    you hate everything about me, but I really don't care
    I'm either sitting and getting high or pulling out me hair
    I wanna be dead but the fear overwhelms me
    I feel like I'm a hoe, like hunter hearst helmsley
    ok, no more talkin, I"m pretty shitty feelin'
    I know I'm feelin' better when it's me that I'm killin'




    Submitted on 2005-10-06 22:06:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is weird. is it like split personalities or something? this one was alright, i really didn't understand it. is dr. shanxx like ur mr. hyde?
    | Posted on 2005-10-09 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]


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