Very interesting perspective. Love and food, two basic necessities and yet not too many people seem to think to make a connection. I congratulate you on this. I like the way you've done the poem, in another's hands it could have ended horribly She greets the day like lips licking salt from a cold french-fry. Love that part
i like how you used food to express your want of a relationship. very nice. you seem to be a very creative writer and i love that you share that with us. i love reading poems that are different from the same ol' thing.
wow. i like how you're able to portray the want of love, and movement from one relationship to another through food. its very interesting and really gives some great images. i really enjoyed the second stanza and its line "cheap romance is difficult to digest".