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    dots Submission Name: Amazedots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 691
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1632



    Description:
       This piece is actually also a picture I drew with wordz ~ The wordz end up on the page in a readable format but they also form the shape of, in this case, a face and I draw a few strategically placed eyes or something linking it and it works well on several creative levels.

    Great weekend all Elitists!
    Love,Peace,Joy!!!
    tif


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    dotsAmazedots
    -------------------------------------------


    Summer Sun Scorched
    Field of Grass
    AGLOW

    Son Sets
    Death
    ABLAZE

    Life
    ANEW

    Where Seasonz
    Meet
    Withered Grass
    2

    Winter Wheat
    A GLORY

    Star Dappled
    Sky

    Featurez Crescent Moon
    .cA STORY

    of the Light
    Veil of Darkness
    only Night
    Day the Hawk
    in Flight
    Soaring with
    NOW

    2

    Hereafter
    i.A SWAY

    on the Wings
    i.AFLOAT

    on the
    Windz
    e
    l
    c
    o
    m
    Epiphany
    a
    c
    h

    Season tells
    A LOT





    Submitted on 2005-10-07 11:05:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I really like the feel of this poem Tif. I just find it a tiny bit hard to follow since the formatting of the text does not allow for the picture to be formed and makes the lyrics a hint difficult to follow. otherwise it's a beautiful piece and I'm 200% positive that the actual picture must be incredible! thanks for sharing!

    Meow!
    | Posted on 2005-10-13 00:00:00 | by lynxstarfire | [ Reply to This ]
      As an artist should always have a free hand - so should a writer. Painting a poem is a very interesting concept Tiff. I think you wrote a very good picture here !
    | Posted on 2005-10-08 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      hi thanx for yor comment unlike the othe comment i read the discription that you painted with these words so the layout suits the picture very good and artistic
    i think some people have a vision of a poem to be written one way only
    i think as writers we have to use the power of imagination to help us write i think that is where i got dancer from and thanx for the comment
    hope all is good
    sandman
    | Posted on 2005-10-07 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      I thought this had potential to be good, but I don't like the way it's laid out. As well, it's got a "funny" sense if wording. I don't really understand the piece!
    | Posted on 2005-10-07 00:00:00 | by miss__smiles | [ Reply to This ]


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