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    dots Submission Name: Its a shockadots
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    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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    dotsIts a shockadots
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    making people hit the flat line
    with these poetry style rap lines
    my mind is lost more than half the time
    but then I tend to find it when I'm writing a rhyme
    you know youlove the Doc, there's no reason you shouldn't,
    remember me saying I'd change if I could? I wouldn't
    Gotta stop being angry bout what I don't have,
    And work alittle harder instead goin' and getting mad




    Submitted on 2005-10-07 15:01:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      make this [censored] longer. a rap's gotta be a lil longer. i liked it though. i think i should start calling u the Doc. so are u a rapping, disecting, king?
    | Posted on 2005-10-09 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      Sounds like you're freestlying...write moreeeeee. *whines like a three year old* please. I love your work.

    much love
    Danni
    | Posted on 2005-10-08 00:00:00 | by Poeticprincess | [ Reply to This ]


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