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    dots Submission Name: LOVE Is...dots
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    Author: CompletelyME
    ASL Info:    19/female
    Elite Ratio:    2.78 - 22/24/8
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Love
    Total Views: 751
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 588



    Description:
       NOT A POEM...not intended to flow or rhyme. This is just some stuff I wrote when I was on a seriously sprung level in a relationship. Thoughts...NOT suggestions on how to change or fix will be greatly appreciated. Thanks


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    dotsLOVE Is...dots
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    LOVE Is...

    To me
    From what I can see
    So beautiful
    So bright
    Colorful
    Warm
    Cold
    Will leave you speechless
    With soooo much to say
    Show you...
    ...things you've never seen
    ...things you never knew
    ...things so...inexplicable
    Make you feel...
    ...many different conflicting things
    ...so many feelings
    Feelings of...
    ...confusion
    ...anxiety
    ...warmth
    ...elation
    LOVE is...
    Control
    LOVE is POWER

    C.ME




    Submitted on 2005-10-08 09:32:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      A nice enlighten poem. I'm not sure your meaning behind love is control and love is power. But all in all it's a very lively poem. Looking forward to reading more.
    | Posted on 2005-10-10 00:00:00 | by AlabamaFarmGirl | [ Reply to This ]
      like mia i don't agree with the love is power thing but i do agree with everything else. You made things clear to those who shall read this..keep writing.
    Much Luv
    Danni
    | Posted on 2005-10-09 00:00:00 | by Poeticprincess | [ Reply to This ]
      i liked it. yes when you have love it can make you feel wonderful.love has powers and can make you do and incredible things.i liked it i think you portrayed love very well.

    ~Gena~
    | Posted on 2005-10-08 00:00:00 | by luvy | [ Reply to This ]
      Well, I liked it. I agree with you, love is all of those things and more. And I love how you used the word "inexplicable". I don't agree with your concluding " love is power " statement, but I enjoyed the entire thing over. Keep it up.
    | Posted on 2005-10-08 00:00:00 | by Mia | [ Reply to This ]


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