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    dots Submission Name: Memoriesdots
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    Author: hidden_cry
    ASL Info:    16/female/canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.74 - 23/25/13
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 219
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    Bytes: 918



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    dotsMemoriesdots
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    She remebers when she was little ,
    Happy memories of her and her mom,
    When everything was perfect and she never had to cry.
    She remembers when her mother still loved her,
    And everybody care.
    As she takes some more pills,
    And tries to remember more.
    She never thought this could happend to her,
    She never had a clue,
    That one day she'd wake up,
    And her Heaven would become a Hell,
    She looks down beside her The bloold dripping from her wrist.
    She wonders how this happend to her,
    How she became something she isn't.
    She hides from her past,
    She hides from the people that has hurt her,
    She hides from her self,
    Because she's scared of what she has to become.
    She hides herself behind her smile,
    But even her smile has it's tear.


    Ashley




    Submitted on 2005-10-08 10:34:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      some how this is kinda like how i felt three weeks ago. Fake smile and all. Sometimes i would just cry for no reason. I liked how this poem caputared that emotion it was cool. And it seems as though like me you're trying to find your voice (I'm high off of poetry right now). You seem to be doing a good job keep up the good work.
    Much Support,
    Danni
    | Posted on 2005-10-24 00:00:00 | by Poeticprincess | [ Reply to This ]



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