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    dots Submission Name: Warriordots
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    Author: E.S. McLaughlin
    ASL Info:    16/f/North Carolina
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 9/14/5
    Words: 321
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Religious
    Total Views: 686
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2034



    Description:
       The name of this rap is "Warrior" I want to see what others think of this and hope it will get the message of a warrior for Christ to others


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    dotsWarriordots
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    Verse 1
    If you're a warrior then stand up
    And if ya hear the war cry
    Then go on, throw ya hands up
    This ain't just another battle
    This is warfare
    Wherever I go
    I know my Savior gon' be there
    Comin' at me?
    That only means more trouble for you
    God said he'd take care of me
    And I know it's true
    He's not a man that He should lie
    So I take Him at His word
    And with His help you'll see me soarin' like a bird
    Chorus:
    'Cause I'm a Warrior
    Yeah with all that I been through
    God helped me make it out
    Now I'm here to show you
    I'm a Warrior
    And you can be one too
    Pray for the strength
    And God Will show you
    You're a Warrior!
    Verse 2:
    Thinkin' back now
    And all I think about
    Times I thought I couldn't make it
    Time You brought me out
    Times the devil tried to slow my pace
    I'm lookin' back on it now like
    "In ya face!"
    'Cause God brought me through
    The times that all I could do
    Was pray and by grace
    God made a way outta no way
    Like I knew He could
    He did it day to day
    Kept me alive, gave me strength to survive
    Chorus:
    'Cause I'm a Warrior
    Yeah with all that I been through
    God helped me make it out
    Now I'm here to show you
    I'm a Warrior
    And you can be one too
    Pray for the strength
    And God Will show you
    You're a Warrior!
    Chant:
    We got the victory now and we're showin' ya how
    So all God's people, throw ya hands up and praise him now

    We got the victory now and we're showin' ya how
    So all God's people, throw ya hands up and praise him now
    'Cause we are Warriors!




    Submitted on 2005-10-08 14:46:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I agree. It bounced along very well with much meaning set all of the way through it. It was very good and I enjoyed reading it.
    | Posted on 2005-10-27 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      this reminds me a bi of "Soldier" by Eminem, probably because of the title...(doesn't matfch up otherwise)
    still a good write, the flow was good, as was the message...there eneds to be more upbeat poetry like this...good stuff

    Storm
    | Posted on 2005-10-09 00:00:00 | by OrionsStorm | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow! I really really like this rap! This is such a positive message in a fun way to state it, did you write this yourself? It's a very good rap, I so like it! I give this a score of 100% Grade A+ and a vote of 5 Wow!
    God bless you, Amen!
    *I am adding this to my favorites list.
    | Posted on 2005-10-09 00:00:00 | by psycho_1 | [ Reply to This ]


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