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    dots Submission Name: The one I always wanted - Youdots
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    Author: Wolfeye_666
    ASL Info:    14/M/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    6.53 - 140/112/21
    Words: 161
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 284
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1003



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       I am tottally in love


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    dotsThe one I always wanted - Youdots
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    My love for you is so big,
    Imagine,
    From Mars to Earth,
    But in the opposite direction,
    They’d never meet,
    And my love for you is that big,

    So whenever your ready,
    Just tell me,
    I’ll be glad to know,
    And then please give me a chance,

    And if you don’t,
    I’ll be locked up,
    Until when?
    Until the end of the world,
    And if it occurs now,
    I would still be locked up,
    Thinking of a way to stop it,
    Because you didn’t see everything in your life,

    I’d break a leg for you,
    I’d sacrifice myself for you,
    Because I love you,
    And you are from now on,
    The best thing on Earth,

    You are the one,
    The one I always wanted,
    Since the first day I say you,
    I said to myself,
    You are the one,
    And now,
    I am kneeling,
    In front of you,
    To offer me a chance when you’ll be ready,




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      you know u really do have a soft side Kev.lol.whoever you wrote this for is lucky...and this was really beautiful and I love the fact that as a guy ur not too afraid to write how you honestly feel and it's cool how you have such pure intentions and you love someone for all it's worth. so just curious did things work out with this person? anyway this was an amazing write...peaceness
    -jess
    | Posted on 2006-02-04 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]
      awwww young love is always so beatiful (this coming from a 15 year old lol) The girl whom you wrote this for is very lucky. I wonder what she thought of it when she read it. If any guy wrote this for me i'd be speechless and happy. Because what girl in her right mind wouldn't want to recieve this. This is a beatiful poem and i think you did a great job.
    Much Support
    Danni
    | Posted on 2005-10-10 00:00:00 | by Poeticprincess | [ Reply to This ]
      awww

    this is totally sweet.
    what a lucky girl!!

    i love this, as usual, just so so honest. your feelings on paper.
    i love this. i love to see how these feelings take you over.
    when there is nothing & nothing comes between it. the whole world looks different

    great job my friend ;)
    stay very happy
    ~jenn
    | Posted on 2005-10-09 00:00:00 | by joy7542 | [ Reply to This ]



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