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    dots Submission Name: Bipartisanshipdots
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    Author: TechnoticQ
    ASL Info:    25/M/Royal Oak, MI
    Elite Ratio:    3.86 - 359/307/43
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 244
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 749



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       I havent been able to write anything non-hateful much lately, so i havent been posting much. Have fun with this one, feel free to comment.


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    Disorder, as a small derision
    Creates acts of a blind attrition.
    Stand in line, son- be served, be fed-
    Be ushered, ambled, handled, led.
    See this simple truth- that lies
    Can buy a way through the disguise
    Of beaurocratic nonsence, given
    To those whose need is to be driven.
    Marry yourself to your party legion
    Or try to break the core adhesion
    Of pompous elephant or ass-
    A choice met by your social class.
    RAGE!
    RAGE, son.
    Against the ties that bind.
    Have your own goals.
    Have your own mind.
    Find your own power inside-
    Wind down from deception- ride.
    Ride out from this slew
    Out of red,
    Out of blue.




    Submitted on 2005-10-08 23:28:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like this as it stands, but i dont agree with what you say it means... (i checked heartbroken's page to see what you said)...
    okay, so i can see why you rage against politics and government and all that... that part i get... i feel the same way at times...
    but i dont see how anything can change unless we all vote... voting in not just a right in this country, it is a requirement for freedom... in this country we are free, but only because we fight to keep it that way... if no one votes what do you think happens... government does not disappear, it grows and grows and grows... spiraling out of control until it is brought back down by the blood of patriots and the skill of politians...
    without voting, one group is able to seize control and keep control... yeah you may not win every race and yeah i know that we need to change many voting laws in this country, and yeah i know we need a 3rd and 4th and 5th party to vote for, but we need to vote... if we dont vote then we have no right to complain when sh it hits the fan...
    so please vote next election... educate yourself and vote... that way we can start to take back our country from the corporations and interests group and make it once again government of the people...
    sorry to rant, but i needed to...
    PEACE and LOVE, greg
    | Posted on 2005-12-09 00:00:00 | by geherald | [ Reply to This ]
      I like the part "Have your own goals, Have your own mind". I think that's what everybody should do!
    This is a good poem, I like it - keep up the good work!
    | Posted on 2005-10-09 00:00:00 | by psycho_1 | [ Reply to This ]



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