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    dots Submission Name: My Rockdots
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    Author: smlaw
    ASL Info:    18/m/ny
    Elite Ratio:    4.48 - 56/37/10
    Words: 190
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsMy Rockdots
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    Attached at the hip, like brother and sister, best friends for life. You've always been just a mile down the road; a phone call at anytime and we'd be right there for eachother. We've survived through every change, every growth, every development. Thats how i know we'll make it through this one too.

    Don't know why, but I wanted you this afternoon. Then I realized that you're not right down the street anymore, you can't come running whenever I need you. I called your cell phone anyways, hoping you'd be able to talk. You were at home getting ready to go back to school, but said you could talk anyways. 12 minutes, thats all it took. Just hearing your voice coming out of my phone, knowing you knew what I was feeling, knowing that you were still there for me just made everything that seemed wrong just go away. You made me feel sane again. In my whirlpool of emotions you were, are, and always will be my rock that keeps me stable. For that I thank you.




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      It's good to write thoughts down as they come too! My writing has been my "rock" in many ways.

    Their are some friendships in life that you know will last. Even though you might drift to live your own lives, you know they are always there.

    Pleasant, thoughtful write...
    | Posted on 2005-10-12 00:00:00 | by Jess | [ Reply to This ]
      a very touching write

    i too have had one friend like this since i was 12 years old and i am now 36
    i have such great memories of us two hanging out watching life quickly go bye

    i could share anything with him and him me


    J I LOVE YA BRO


    take Care

    and thank you for helping me remember good memories
    | Posted on 2005-10-10 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Well put and very emotional. I wish I had a rock (that sounds silly..). You should cherish this friend of yours, always. A very heart felt piece. Keep writing.

    - Sethesin
    | Posted on 2005-10-10 00:00:00 | by Sethesin | [ Reply to This ]
      Isn't it wonderful to have such a loyal and loving friend? I feel blessed to have such a friend myself, my rock when all else seems to be falling down around me. This was a soothing read, thank you.

    +Jo
    | Posted on 2005-10-09 00:00:00 | by whisperslove | [ Reply to This ]


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