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    dots Submission Name: The Plandots
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    Author: Poetic Cure
    ASL Info:    49.f.mn
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 313/137/33
    Words: 161
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
    Total Views: 221
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       Fall is one of my favorite seasons.


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    dotsThe Plandots
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    Fall a colorful season.
    Leaves of red and green
    yellow and brown,
    covering the ground.

    Nature’s blanket,
    of many talents.
    Showing its beauty
    to all, big and small.

    Furry little animals
    scurrying around,
    filling their cheeks with
    what they can find.
    Storing for the winter,
    preparing their family
    for the season ahead.

    Gardens with no more to give.
    Resting for the rebirth in the spring.
    Orange and white pumpkins
    waiting to be carried in.

    Wind blowing its cool breeze.
    Warning us all of that’s coming.

    Trees dropping its fruit,
    readying for the next page
    of Natures book.

    V of birds flying over,
    wings waving good-bye.
    .
    Days are shorter.
    Nights are longer.
    Moon and stars brighter.

    Frost sneaking in,
    covering all that is warm.
    Melting as the sun awakens.

    Fall is Natures plan,
    getting all to ready,
    for the cold and wild winter
    about to be born.




    Submitted on 2005-10-09 20:52:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Becca, A very inspiring poem about nature. I can just see my little squirrels around my house with their jaws poking out wide because of their mouths filled with acorns from the ground. The pretty colors of autumn is a grand thing to see!
    | Posted on 2005-10-25 00:00:00 | by AlabamaFarmGirl | [ Reply to This ]
      yey, a fall poem. i've never really tried describing nature, because if i did i'd probably end up describing another bloody emotion.
    it's so pretty i like reading it, so i read it twice!
    you're getting the nack of this good job.
    love ya
    -Your Son
    | Posted on 2005-10-23 00:00:00 | by Abort_Chaotic | [ Reply to This ]
      yeah i was expecting a love poem, but i guess it works since u "love" fall this much. i love how u described all of the highlights of fall so beuatifully, and made something so complicated seem so simple withouth losing its majesty.
    | Posted on 2005-10-15 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a nice autumn poem. Autumn is such a lovely season with all it has to offer! I must say that this isnt what I was expecting from the love classification and I am pleasantly surprised. Autumn is a beautiful season with all its vibrancy and colorful characteristics. And I love to stargaze and your poem has hit on that as well as the fall is the best season to view the sky! This is a lovely seasonal write you have here. Great poem! Thanks for sharing!

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2005-10-10 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]



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