Description: Please keep it real and give me what this poem needs and how does it make you feel.
Describe to me how bad does this poem make you want for someone.
Give me anything that you think this poem could need to make it want more viewers to comment on this.
Passion for a lover -------------------------------------------
The art of us coming together
as one to be a whole
Caressing one another to
reach that peak of sexual feeling
The way she moves her
body from left to right
Never stoping until she has
reached her climax
Silky carmel brown skin that
I wanna lick from head to toe
In making love having you scream
Together as one at last all
this time this passion is burning for me to be inside you
Only if we can fall in love but can
we after we have tried so hard to
Your eyes the way that you look at me
and I look at you with that same desire
My love your love all have that
same burning fire
Passionate love please come to me and truly let me see that you are the one for me.
Passionate lover come and make love to me so I can give you what you have been waiting for.
If you keep insiting to I have to give you more of what you want?
WOW....i have to admit that poem got me a little bit......grrrrr...ive felt that way many times before....dont you just love that feeling of wanting more and more.....i hate sexual tension...i just want want that passion and love in my life....deffinately one of my favorites.
I have to agree with CME. very good write! I felt the "fire" of this poem. you gave good images and feelings to the reader. I too would have liked it more if there was more to like but good job. I really liked ur last 3 stanzas. good write.
I really enjoyed reading this. I wish there was more to it. I want that passion and that emotion in my life, and you expressed it so well. I know whoever you're with will stay satisfied with that type of passion.Keep it up.