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Author:	Cinder7
Elite Ratio:	6.29 - 49/46/16
Words:	86

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
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Let me if this desribed love to you as it did me?

How to describe love 101 dots

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To cry a happy tear,
One of the most beautiful sensations.

To see his eyes shine
In fear and anticipation,
God that's unbelievable

To see him get on one knee.
It makes you shake
Like a cold newborn baby boy.

To see his smile when you say yes.
It's like the world has stopped spinning
just for you.

And to feel that kiss,
That reassuring kiss, that he's all yours.
It's like the warm sun is glowing all around you.

Submitted on 2005-10-10 11:04:53 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  well i think this is a good poem, it is has a lovely feel to it, its kind of romantic happy poem.
It is such a pleasure to read something so alive, veryfew people write these sort of poem since many and almost every poem is about hate, so thanks for writting this sweet poem.

well all thses people saying about your using word like sun etc have some point, well i am tell this only because i to used a word which was called a universal in one of my love poem and the maximam people didn't liked its placement there.

well you are a good poet and keep on
bye
nishant
| Posted on 2006-08-23 00:00:00 | by imagination | [ Reply to This ]
  it feels to me, with a jaded heart the apparatus of sensation, like a fairy tale. I take comfort that it is in the first person. Sensing that it’s personal perspective might be autobiographical makes me light despite the lead in my shoes. With the thought that it could be true and enduring, not merely a concoction of circumstances and preconditions, it makes me wonder if perchance, it is indeed possible that in the remote out posts of possibility, it could be, not just true for you, but true for me (I know that was far too long a sentence). It brings little flutters in my heart to put my self into your poem as a character in its love hope or love blush. This is good (in my understated way, it that means it is very good). I will not say it is a masterpiece, but today it is the right thing at the right time.
| Posted on 2005-10-12 00:00:00 | by Car va g o | [ Reply to This ]
  Very nicely written! I like how you have described this feeling! Yes indeed I know how this feels and it is truly a wonderful feeling! True love is different in so many ways than any other feeling and when it is good is it the joy of a lifetime. You have done a wonderful job expressing this feeling and I love all the different ways you have mentioned here. Good poem! Take care!

Lorna
| Posted on 2005-10-10 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
  I can relate to this poem. I like the way it flows. it's simple and shows the emotions in love. maybe you should have added one more paragraph? Either way its great writing!
| Posted on 2005-10-10 00:00:00 | by PinkFairy | [ Reply to This ]

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