Description: i don't really like the way this one reads. i am so overcome with emotion right now that it probably sucks and doesn't convey anything. my fiance and i are apart from eachother right now and i needed to get some stuff off my chest. this poem is more for her than anything.
you were there -------------------------------------------
when i cried
you were there to stop the tears
and when i felt pain
you were there to make it go away
we spent day after day together
laughing and having fun
we argued a few times
but we always made up
you were there when i needed you
and you were there when i wanted you
you were there when i woke up
you were there when i went to sleep
and you were there to make everything better
now you're not here with me
the tears won't stop
the pain won't cease
i can't see your face everyday
you can't greet me with a kiss in the morning
and a kiss in the evening
i can't touch your body
feel you face
or press my lips against yours
i don't know what to do
now that you're not here
you can say that it won't be long
but it can't be short enough
i know i will see you again
but in the mean time i will go insane
because you were there
and now you're not
love, it's kinda like a drug. it takes you in and carresses you, makes you feel grand, while simultaneously causing hurt, and leaving withdrawls at the absence of it all leaving you pondering how you lived without it once gone, emotional write straight from the heart, i can appreciate that, nice
This poem might not have a steady flow to it but it shows your emotions very well. What you are feeling. I am sorry that I am not there I would love nothing more than to be there for you. See you soon. Love you. Ali
Submission Name: you were there
