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changes prt 2

Author: unknown soldier
ASL Info:    17/kenner, La (N.O)
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i only did 2 verses so this is the second half.

changes prt 2

I see know changes
Cuz everyone’s convinced that life is a dream
But I know the world is a nightmare it seems
Like the screams of kids have to just be ignored
They’re considered collateral
during times when we’re in war
Why do soldiers have to die?
Slaughtered by terrorists specializing in suicide
While Bush sits safe in the oval
And those fighting for freedom
are no longer hopeful
Reproachful due to all the soldiers we’re losing
Bush isn’t even aware
of his presidential power abusing
Perusing through the mind of this guilty politician
cuz we don’t need no more terrorism repetitions
Trying to make a vision
into a global rescue mission
Politically complicated
Hated by those who hold their loved ones sacred
Still I see no changes
Tupac’s no longer here to speak
So we have to be strong
It’s up to us to hold up the weak

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  wow...we share a deep dislike of bush that is uncerpassed by many lol. I liked this one...and these isssues are still taken into consideration all the while bush is oblivious to the problems he's causing on a widespread level. anyway great write troy...I loved it! this is another favorite
| Posted on 2005-12-12 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]
  hey troy! all that crap with 9-11 confused da [censored] outta me! i didnt even noe haev thoughs places even existed i felt stupid! ya u gotta keep ur head up! SUCK IT UP! thats wat u tell me! lol! see i do listen 2 u! anyway good job!
~akaila evonne~
| Posted on 2005-10-23 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]
  hmm... i didnt know that you disliked busch this much. i don realy follow up on politics but i always thought that if we wernt in iraq then their would have been much more suicide bombings after 9-11. Always thought that their were only two things on his mind when he sent those men out. one to stop future bombing and two to get oil.but then again i never realy did follow up on politics.but this write was realy good and it was a great follow up to changes a prt 1. member keep your head up baby boy.

| Posted on 2005-10-14 00:00:00 | by luvy | [ Reply to This ]
  yo tupac is still alive lol. but anyways this was hot and poppin. keep is texas never been there before. Hope you get your computer back.
Much Luv and Support,
| Posted on 2005-10-10 00:00:00 | by Poeticprincess | [ Reply to This ]

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