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    dots Submission Name: changes prt 2dots
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    Author: unknown soldier
    ASL Info:    17/kenner, La (N.O)
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 1348/1346/203
    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 894
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1007



    Description:
       i only did 2 verses so this is the second half.


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    dotschanges prt 2dots
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    I see know changes
    Cuz everyone’s convinced that life is a dream
    But I know the world is a nightmare it seems
    Like the screams of kids have to just be ignored
    They’re considered collateral
    during times when we’re in war
    Why do soldiers have to die?
    Slaughtered by terrorists specializing in suicide
    While Bush sits safe in the oval
    And those fighting for freedom
    are no longer hopeful
    Reproachful due to all the soldiers we’re losing
    Bush isn’t even aware
    of his presidential power abusing
    Perusing through the mind of this guilty politician
    Listen
    cuz we don’t need no more terrorism repetitions
    Trying to make a vision
    into a global rescue mission
    Politically complicated
    Hated by those who hold their loved ones sacred
    Still I see no changes
    Tupac’s no longer here to speak
    So we have to be strong
    It’s up to us to hold up the weak




    Submitted on 2005-10-10 16:34:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow...we share a deep dislike of bush that is uncerpassed by many lol. I liked this one...and these isssues are still taken into consideration all the while bush is oblivious to the problems he's causing on a widespread level. anyway great write troy...I loved it! this is another favorite
    peace
    | Posted on 2005-12-12 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]
      hey troy! all that crap with 9-11 confused da [censored] outta me! i didnt even noe haev thoughs places even existed i felt stupid! ya u gotta keep ur head up! SUCK IT UP! thats wat u tell me! lol! see i do listen 2 u! anyway good job!
    ~akaila evonne~
    | Posted on 2005-10-23 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]
      hmm... i didnt know that you disliked busch this much. i don realy follow up on politics but i always thought that if we wernt in iraq then their would have been much more suicide bombings after 9-11. Always thought that their were only two things on his mind when he sent those men out. one to stop future bombing and two to get oil.but then again i never realy did follow up on politics.but this write was realy good and it was a great follow up to changes a prt 1. member keep your head up baby boy.

    ~Gena~
    | Posted on 2005-10-14 00:00:00 | by luvy | [ Reply to This ]
      yo tupac is still alive lol. but anyways this was hot and poppin. keep writing...how is texas never been there before. Hope you get your computer back.
    Much Luv and Support,
    Danni
    | Posted on 2005-10-10 00:00:00 | by Poeticprincess | [ Reply to This ]


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