I don't smoke, so I can't relate to this at all. I do like, however, that this can be applied both to cigarettes, and also to the much broader subject of love. Things with dual meanings like that are fun to sort through.
Good piece, overall. Easy to read, good flow, and good word choice combine to create an above-average poem.
This is interesting. I smoke so I can relate to this poem. It is a classic love/hate relationship. Well, at least for me it is. I like the way you describe this as it could be love for a person as well. The only thing I wonder about in this one is the very last line. It seems as if there is a word missing and the sentence seems incomplete. I thought it was going toward "nicotine fit" and it seems almost like you just forgot to type it in there? Otherwise this is a really good poem. Nice job. take care!