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    dots Submission Name: And You Say You Love Me?dots
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    Author: Liminality
    ASL Info:    15/Male/WA
    Elite Ratio:    3.05 - 8/13/6
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       A Sad moment of my life, again dealing with my mom.


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    dotsAnd You Say You Love Me?dots
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    Every word you speak pierces my heart, and tears it apart.
    All the lies you tell me murder me in my sleep.
    Everyday you hurt me with that dagger you call love.

    Just shut the heck up!
    I don’t care what you have to say,
    I can’t take it anymore,
    And neither can my heart.

    Just speak the truth, just for once.
    I can see through all your strangling,
    Slaughtering, destroying, murderous lies

    You say you love me?
    Then leave and never come back!
    I’m leaving without one more thought about it!
    Get out of my life and stay out!
    I’m leaving without one more look back!

    Just let me live,
    And just let me be.




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    ||| Comments |||
      Sam
    this is for you
    just remember
    your mother does love you
    but she is frightened of losing you
    ...

    she is the rock
    you are the water
    she is suck in the mud
    you are flowing with life
    she is going nowhere
    you are moving on
    she is afraid
    you are courageous
    she is disappointed
    you are ambitious
    she will be lonely
    you will be loving
    | Posted on 2005-11-29 00:00:00 | by ertha | [ Reply to This ]
      you seem to write your poetry with a great deal of anger in heart. I can't tell you that I don't understand, because I'd be lying, but I can tell you that it does no good to harbor those thoughts. My best advice to you would be to live your life and pursue your happiness the way you want to, and just pass on by the people standing in your way. If they are holding you down, just let go. Don't harbor the emotions arising from the injustices they've dealt you, but rather remove yourself from the situation so that you can continue to search for that ever elusive happiness. Granted, you are 15, and that restricts you a lot, but things will change with time, I promise. Until then, keep your head up and live life in the moment. If you can't enjoy who you are, the things you are doing and the places you are going, what is the point?
    | Posted on 2005-10-10 00:00:00 | by Raistlin Sith | [ Reply to This ]



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