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    dots Submission Name: She Knowsdots
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    Author: Raivn
    ASL Info:    33/f/al
    Elite Ratio:    4.28 - 1222/916/231
    Words: 166
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       I got this quote book, and it has some of the most beautiful love quotes that I have ever read. One of them was something like the last line of this poem and it inspired me. I keep thinking about how beautiful every day is when you're waking up beside someone that you love.


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    Waking up beside him, she knows
    That everything will be all right.
    Thinkgs just seem much more serene,
    Bathed in morning light.
    Falling asleep in his arms, she knows
    Her dreams will be full of hope.
    Even if she had a nightmare, she would wake,
    And he would help her cope.
    Lying beside him on the couch, she knows
    That their love will last forever.
    She touches his face and kisses his lips,
    And they gently fit together.
    Walking hand in hand, she knows
    That he will always feel the same.
    She knew he was the one for her
    When it was her heart he chose to claim.
    Sharing a smile with him, she knows
    That when he laughs, she is complete.
    The touch of his hand brings comfort or passion.
    His heart is the reason hers chooses to beat.
    Falling into him, she knows
    That her body fits him as a glove.
    Every day is a glorious reminder.
    Ordinary things are made beautiful with love.




    Submitted on 2005-10-11 09:27:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Thats the truth I have found my love and in her I give everything and it is all made better. Keep the love alive and keep the writing flowing. Blake!!
    | Posted on 2007-09-23 00:00:00 | by deranged shadow | [ Reply to This ]
      i love this so much...i guy in my life fits this to a tee, but we are not together due to "obsticles" but still nothing is better than his laugh or smile, makes me just well happy. the way he touches my hand makes the world disapear. this beautiful, going into my fav's

    Jennifer
    | Posted on 2005-10-11 00:00:00 | by _winky_ | [ Reply to This ]
      Aww damn it! This so perfectly describes my husband and I! No matter what's coming, what's happening, as long as we're together life is good.
    This is a great piece. Thanks for the awesome read!
    Traci :)
    | Posted on 2005-10-11 00:00:00 | by onetruesmartass | [ Reply to This ]
      well if this isn't a post that makes those who believe in love go awwww then I dont know what is...

    I liked all the desciptions...reminded me of a past life I lived...only I just couldn't grasp the beauty as how you see it...but that's not because its not a good write...it's only because I'm bitter...:D couldnt help but to think been there done that and yep I'm alone after all of it lol...

    still though I envy people who can write of such hope and beauty with love...;)

    Tina the ghetto ballerina.
    | Posted on 2005-10-11 00:00:00 | by Brownsdelight | [ Reply to This ]


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