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Submission Name: Carrot dots

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Author:	Tissue
ASL Info:	17/Male/New York
Elite Ratio:	5.06 - 80/87/33
Words:	61

Class/Type:	Poetry/Comedy
Total Views:	224
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	339

Description:
Just a playful, old poem. I know the lines are a little forced, but I wasn't taking this too seriously (as you can probably tell from the theme).

Carrot

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The semi-sweet, juicy carrot
Fills my mouth with stronger flavor-
Small vegetable with great merit;
Its soul to tongue will I savor.

Carry on, cooked carrot! Go on!
You're easily the full winner.
Succulent sauces will you don,
And I'll have you for dinner.

Submitted on 2005-10-11 10:26:21 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Heh. I like it, it's a nice break from all the "AAH, CUT CUT CUT MUTILATION SUICIDE I WANNA DIE" poems we have on this site. It's kinda short, but it does what, I'm guessing, was intended when it was written, and that's make the reader laugh, or at least bring a smile to their face. Really, I had a bad day, and this was probably the first thing that made me smile today. =P

By the way, thanks for the comments on my song, and yes, it was, in fact, a song.
| Posted on 2006-01-17 00:00:00 | by Trifecta | [ Reply to This ]
  That was a fun read
although I feel (this is just me here)
that the style is a bit too serious for the topic
but then again, this may be the aim of this poetic
exercise.
I enjoyed it nonetheless.....
| Posted on 2005-10-11 00:00:00 | by arkayye | [ Reply to This ]
  a funny write
i enjoyed it
thanks for your comments on my poems

i listen to all who comment and yours is no exception
feel free to read a few more i am tinkering with a non rhyming style as most of my poetry has been rhymes
sometimes i do get a little too deep thou your right

Take Care and keep writing

it heals
| Posted on 2005-10-11 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
  hahaha! Too funny! A charming little post honoring the carrot! Bugs Bunny would be proud of this one! Such an interesting short and sweet tribute to a great vegetable! I can honestly say I have never read a poem about a carrot before so my hats off to you for uniqueness and originality! And thanks for the smile too! Take care!

Lorna
| Posted on 2005-10-11 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
  LMAO!

I am not too sure what to say about this one. You most definately had the rhyming scheme down! I just don't know what else to say about it. All in all, it was funny as heck to me!
Candi
| Posted on 2005-10-11 00:00:00 | by dreamweaver | [ Reply to This ]

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