Sign up to EliteSkills

Already have an account? Login to Roleplay.Cloud
Forgot password? Recover Password

Nothing Will Ever Come of It

Author: Sweet as Sugar
ASL Info:    17/F/WY
Elite Ratio:    3.7 - 43 /50 /13
Words: 163
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
Total Views: 702
Average Vote:    No vote yet.
Bytes: 969


Here we go. Confession time. This poem may not be good (at all), but it expresses the feelings I have for a friend of mine. Last year I could have easily had him, but foolishly let it go by. Now I never talk to him and feel hurt by his ignoring ways. I don't know what to do and so this is my heart dying to give up but knowing that it can't.

P.S. I know this is a terrible poem so be merciful

Nothing Will Ever Come of It

I see a twinkle in your eye
Across the room you search for longing in my face
With soft amber eyes you return my gaze
But nothing will ever come of it

You speak with a captivating voice, embracing me wholly.
I laugh at your simple words
Recognition in your eyes makes my heart beat loud and I am sure everyone heard
But nothing will ever come of it.

Tears trickle from my eyes
You hold me close in warm strong arms
Near your heart where each beat easily charms
But nothing will ever come of it.

You once asked me to be yours
Indirtectly of course but still
If asked again I'd be yours by God's dear will
But nothing will ever come of it.

I hear distance in your words
I feel coldness in your look
I try to gain your heart but thats something I never took.
And now I know nothing ever came of it

Submitted on 2005-10-11 17:05:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
Edit post

Rate This Submission

1: >_<
2: I dunno...
3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!


  Nothing makes one wallow or bitter like missed chances at's like I say fate's a bytch and cupid has a warped sense of humor...

The only thing I want to suggest is maybe changing the title to "nothing will ever come" since that seems to be the theme of the piece...
| Posted on 2005-10-20 00:00:00 | by Brownsdelight | [ Reply to This ]
  Well I like the way you told the story here, it certainly isn't as bad as you seem to think.
It's a problem of life, the missed opportunities that can come back to haunt us.

Nice way of sharing it.

Be Happy

| Posted on 2005-10-11 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
  ah a broken heart
the sad reality of love
its sad that love always has so many questions
why cant love be just that a way for two people tp share life peacefully
im sorry im ranting but its true
i think people let other peoples opinions get in the way of love
the human heart is a very delicate instrument and it knows when true love is at hand
i really liked your poem it was deep
please let me know when you post again as your poetry definately makes me think something i dont do enough of

Take Care
| Posted on 2005-10-11 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]

Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

1. Be honest.
2. Try not to give only compliments.
3. How did it make you feel?
4. Why did it make you feel that way?
5. Which parts?
6. What distracted from the piece?
7. What was unclear?
8. What does it remind you of?
9. How could it be improved?
10. What would you have done differently?
11. What was your interpretation of it?
12. Does it feel original?